MasterHexer
By the way author I may not be commenting alot or reading new chapters because of exams coming up and because of Aisha and Zoë is something my beliefs doesn't support. But this is a wonderful story I will try reading it when I can. Its rough ar9und the edges but it will get better
Appreciate the well wishes. This story has always made me smile and I am surprised this is a first draft for your story. You never forced anything in story and although this doesn't feel preachy. At least you made showed that the world doesn't revolve around Peter and people have a life of their own. Do I agree with Aisha.No. She dropped in favourbility but she is a character that does her purpose. So I this great. I just hope that this blows up
MasterHexer:First of all, good luck with the exams. Second of all, I hope I can make the story good enough that despite your beliefs and everything, it will be able to bring a smile to your face. I'm not trying to preach here or tell anybody what they should think. I'm trying to make a good story, full of interesting characters, that do different things. I sometimes don't agree with my character either. Anyway... Good luck with the exams, again! I hope you will nail them.