Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn as a celestial in marvel

Friend, maybe I was very harsh in my previous comment, I felt dissatisfied with the way he lost, asking for mercy. Maybe if he had transported to another place or simply escaping, threatening that he would return more powerful to have his revenge

Author, Write this fan-fic how you want It to be not others!! There will always be people who will not like how you write, those people can **** off it they don’t like it. I love the concept and am annyoed that others are being rude about how your writing your own fic. Write for yourself not for others!!

great work man just keep the chapters coming you're doing awsome ** I hate odin

It's better. Makes more sense that the celestial wins. A hint for you is to work on your fighting scenes, it looked like a report. Grade 4,2/5 I think

i didnt mind him losing just that he didnt really harm odin at all and that he begged but this is fine just expected him to take some damage but yes this was better. sorry for harsh comment last chapter. where will the story go now

I think you should stick to what you enjoy writing. You’re not being paid so you don’t have to please everyone and if you enjoy what you’re writing there will be others that do as well. Stay motivated , take some criticism but don’t always bend to the way others want your story to be

epic.....nice chapter...thank you.

i just started reading your fanfic and it is good keep up the good work

There so many things tô get from asgard, If is true asgard in another dimension, with ygdrassil, the well of mimir, golden apples of virtual immortality, Odin vault has the tablet of life and time that give a serum enable him evolve beoynd a celestial lvls of powers, reaching the final stage of hes especie, a supreme immortality, and night-ominpotent powers multiverse lvl , the almost ominipotence insane Power dont last in regular people but a celestial there is no such thing he can absorb the Power tô himself and make permanent. All the information about, Magic,runes, Uru, asgardian aesir/vanir bloodline , thor bloodlines a hybrid aesir/Elder God hes mother Gaea, the Gods of the dark that manipularem Ragnarok absorb they Power. Use reality warping give yourself Power mimicry replicate the Odinforce a almost unlimited sorce of Divine , copy 2 times and make true unlimited become the First Celestial God of unlimited cósmic and Divine Powers. Replicate the New unlimited Odin Force in a Uru Armor with best runes so u can always improve, Power and Control doin nothing If you know true Magic of Uru. Oe take the Stones of infinity in MCU,Uru, odin force, runes create a godly armor like thanos in Marvel game and become more Omnipotent doing nothing!!!!

You did a good job, but don’t make him that OP that nothing will be a challenge. Anyways thanks for the chapter! Keep up the great work. 😁

yes

just do whatever you can don't listing to all the haters

thanks for the Chapter keep writing

The chapters are too slow make it fast please 💖💖👏👏

Keep going please 🤩👌

moooooorrrrrreeee

Mabye this fight will meet the expectations of those who hated the original outcome