DimensionLord
10 whole chapters of prologue basically this is nice, will the prologue continue for another 20 "chapters" or naw?
the time skips? I never added any time skips in this book and I had established that The MC is lazy arrogant and overall an Jerk, I also formed his background by showing what was his life before he died and lead to his journey towards a Magnificent perfection. Even before his death I also shown that he had this idea that he is perfect and the system is just pushing his ego further and it will develop later in the story. Maybe I didn't convey it well enough for you so I'm sorry my dear reader. Yes I know my chapters are shorter than other Authors but I'm doing this out of fun and the length of all my chapters are based on my mood. My book isn't for everybody cause of this you don't need to continue reading it, Thank you for your opinion but please be a bit nicer about it instead of trying to insult my intelligence.
FrightKnight88:The first chapter didnt establish anything about the mc other than that he is lazy and died.... And that's not what a prologue is, the prologue just ended in actuality since you just finished the time skips that establish background. Probably doesnt help your story has almost no detail and the length of all your 10 chapters is probably the average authors 1-2 chapters