I love this chapter as it's is expressed more better, and I can imagine every single word, and picture how they look like. Your words are descriptive, and easy in the same way to read.
I love this novel with all my heart, and thinks it deserves an award.
I'm really liking this a lot and I appreciate the time skip. It showed us that he indeed works very hard instead of just saying it and then giving him an immediate handout.