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Comments of chapter undefined of The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage

God_drator
God_dratorLv3God_drator

For the author: My suggestion for the book: Try to make each chapter a title, so that our expectations for the chapter will tense or something.... The only drawback about this, is the little spoiler you get (if only u get too specific)

WISEDRAGON
WISEDRAGONLv6WISEDRAGON

A fusion spell for a basic spell caster is never heard of . one must know multitude of spells to create a fusion spell . for a fusion spell is nothing like a advanced spell

zhaderx
zhaderxLv4zhaderx

Quite happy with how the spell fusion project turned out, it’s not something you can just make after getting the idea, it’s a monumental task and it will probably be extremely rewarding at the end of it.

oReaper
oReaperLv1oReaper

What would happen if he fuses all his elements together?

Tarzanie
TarzanieLv4Tarzanie

Just a general question of intrest, do you expect to write out each floor. e.g floor 1: ch 100, floor2: ch 200, floor3: ch 300, etc. Or are there time skips? Such as: Otto and the kids had trained diligently over the following 3 months, and also each cleared the floors on <expert> mode. Otto cleared <Titled I> for each of the floors, which gave him great rewards. Now Otto is staring into the distance with a tint of excitement on his face. The kids are fidgeting around nervously. Since everyone is now on the 4th floor and are standing infrom of the teleportation gate to the 4th floor and are making their final preparations. From the 4th floor up tHere are team floors. Otto makes his last preperations and looks ar his status. Name: <Toto> etc etc

XieErkrueg
XieErkruegLv10XieErkrueg

Awesomeness !

Masterreader
MasterreaderLv14Masterreader

I hope the next floor is even more hader for him

TheCityCouncil
TheCityCouncilLv15TheCityCouncil

Yes!!! New floor! Been a lot of buildup, looking forward to what this next floor is like.

webnovel6_3746
webnovel6_3746Lv1webnovel6_3746

thanks

BrPerdido
BrPerdidoLv5BrPerdido

I love training arcs just as much as I do floors. It's amazing seeing the characters grow in different ways than just "got a shit ton of stats"

ObamaUchiha
ObamaUchihaLv4ObamaUchiha

i think it would be better to shorten the training arcs idk but i mostly skipped the chapters cause it was boring but i like when otto is researching and learning

Time_Zekrom_4361
Time_Zekrom_4361Lv11Time_Zekrom_4361

Thanks for the Chapter!!!

Jennifer_Fish
Jennifer_FishLv10Jennifer_Fish

Keep up the good work

irl
irlLv7irl

thanks for the chapter! 😃 --well, hopefully he'll be able to make it work in the future.

BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5BrabbitX

at this point, mc has spent hundreds of years in training he better not be a little bitch in front of the bitch again.

ArthurPenDragon
ArthurPenDragonLv1ArthurPenDragon

pls not so many training chapters and more main story progress.

Victhagas
VicthagasLv2Victhagas

One thing that may help in the next floors situation: You can make some Hard Floors, by 5 and 5 floors, "1"(Initial) - 5 (Harder) - 10 (Even harder) - 15 (Harder) - 20 (Even Harder). In that way, you can "haste" some of the "non-hard" floors, like 6, 7, 13, 14, 18, writing them in 5 chapters or so. Another option is making big skips after the Otto Team concluded the first Area (1), for example, after floor 20 skipping to '30s. Just some ideas that you can ignore if u don't like them! Loving the novel!! [img=recommend]

TedybearEnthusiast
TedybearEnthusiastLv10TedybearEnthusiast

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TedybearEnthusiast
TedybearEnthusiastLv10TedybearEnthusiast

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Kornsinanju
KornsinanjuLv14Kornsinanju

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