Thanks for the illustrations!!!

I thought these two events happened in a different time. Does anyone know about it?

One thing that may help in the next floors situation: You can make some Hard Floors, by 5 and 5 floors, "1"(Initial) - 5 (Harder) - 10 (Even harder) - 15 (Harder) - 20 (Even Harder). In that way, you can "haste" some of the "non-hard" floors, like 6, 7, 13, 14, 18, writing them in 5 chapters or so. Another option is making big skips after the Otto Team concluded the first Area (1), for example, after floor 20 skipping to '30s. Just some ideas that you can ignore if u don't like them! Loving the novel!! [img=recommend]

I'll try my best to give you constructive critics. Count on me.

Wait.. a dumb question, those ESPERS have their power in real life? If they do, I guess it would be I little... strange but ok.

Loved the Author Thoughts in the end

I love this story. It has a nice MC development and a well-constructed background. My only problem with it is not like a real real problem but is the non-frequently interaction of MC with another player. I really think that author will connect more and more MC w/ other players. Loving the story!!

Wonderful.