Comments of chapter undefined of God´s Eyes

Ok so I’ve noticed something and would like to share it with the author : Jason is becoming a rather bland character In this chapter (and the end of the previous one) we have an embarrassing situation yet we never know what Jason is feeling, at best we can try to deduce it from what he says. But this makes the character poorer. Emotion are an unintentional visceral reaction to a situation, they aren’t supposed to be rational or deduced. Here I would have expected something like “ Jason felt embarrassed” or even better “The questioning gazes of his camarades made him want to drill into the ground” not even making the emotion explicit. This contrasts with the first few chapters, where we could feel Jason’s despair and this also contrasts with Artemis, who is full of character and emotions, and I suspect that this is due to the fact that she can’t talk, so this was done inadvertently. On the other hand, we mostly see what Jason does or says, not what he feels. Let him almost chuckle in a serious situation because of something humorous only he noticed, or have his emotions not be reflected in his actions. Sorry if this seemed harsh, I really just wish author can improve this Thank you for the chapter