I've read the other book of yours with the exact same story, I loved it. eventhough it only has 8 chp till now. is this like a rewrite or smth because until now it's exactly the same as the other book. And I still love it! can't wait for the story to continue past chp 8☺️

I'd love to read more!! what's going to happen now?!

Sorry I love this Book and DnD so much... I coudn´t hold myself after the Editer´s Note

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it just feels like there might be something missing, like I said up until the fight with those demon spiders everything makes sense, but ever since that woman introduced him to those Demon formations or whatever and he got these patterns the storyline just feels so segmented, or ripped apart, (I mean she even called him junior even though he's an elder)then he somehow gets a pill master that he spends a month with even though he only had 2 week until he had to fight in the tournament.the tournament is also not mentioned again after he goes on that Demon mission. plus he has endurance problems when refining pills there eventhough he literally made pills for the elders and sect master before, for hours on end??then there is this martial uncle the suddenly entered the picture, wasn't li ming supposed to be the one in the sect with the highest/most experience when it came to body cultivation, how come this uncle is now suddenly training him?I'm just so confused as to what is happening right now...😓 sorry if I misunderstood.

what happened to the tournament?ever since the chapter were the first round started the story became so incoherent, that the fight with the demons and everything after felt like it was not the plotline of the main character but someone else....🤔out of nowhere an elder got killed, then the next moment a "martial uncel" appeared who suddenly beat him senseless, in between that he started taking pill lessons and some random chick carved some type of demonic seal/Symbols in his body.... oh and he got a bird.....🤨this isn't meant to be judgmental or anything it's just that I am genuinely confused as to what is going one right now ...😓 the story is good yes, but these last couple of chapters just feel like they don't add up somehow. or is it just me not understanding?

i don't know. sorry...

it's an amazing comic I love it!!eventhough at times the english translation just completely stops and i can't read what they say but story and art are awesome

🤣🤣don't worry about it 🤣🤣

i tried making a joke 😅 but I'm no good at making jokes.it's a curse I have to live with😓😅

ok

i live the NEW Cover🥰🥰🥰

First!!I can't wait!! I want more!...please...thx love this chapter

oh that's cool man

"cry me a river , build a bridge and get over it"🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣I love it!!maybe the most cutest and cuddly thing is in fact the most ferocious and strongest of them all??what do you mean by "it's not my work" are just translating?...love this chapter thx

🤣🤣🤣🤣big Bad evil guy AKA final Endboss: "Pissman"!!!!🤣🤣🤣🤣I don't even want to know Kurohimes thoughts on this...🤣🤣🤣...love this chapter thx

🤣🤣🤣🤣road trip?? over the water???but can they just leave school like that??🤣🤣🤣that's gonna be fun!...love this chapter thx

oh wow it's Hydra...what, did red skull got a kid too or is that grumpy old bag of bones still running the show?...love this chapter thx

ok that makes more sense 😅I'm just not familiar with boarding schools...

those villains are so stupid their just standing there watching as their partners are pummeled senseless🤦🏽‍♀️typical sidekick-villains......love this chapter thx