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Comments of chapter undefined of God´s Eyes

_rafa
_rafaLv15_rafa

What a shame, the story was going so well but this somewhat ruins it. With Artemis, there was some emotion behind the soulbond and it felt fated. Also, white owls can be cute and make sense for a companion. But this one, not only is a scorpion unappealing, but it's weak and the reason for the soulbond seems immoral. Even if he can form as many soulbonds as he wants, it makes no sense for the protagonist of a story. You want every bond to feel meaningful and have emotion behind it. I'll keep reading a bit more but I might drop the novel.

_rafa
_rafaLv15_rafa

I didn't drop the novel. I stand by what I said but the story (ignoring the scorpion) is one of the best I've read.

RezerG
RezerGLv5RezerG

Sorry to say this but I have to... very unappealing beast.

wlitsch
wlitschLv11wlitsch

what about the flower he collected?

DreamedLullaby
DreamedLullabyLv15DreamedLullaby

Thanks for the chapter~🐱

Shellykins
ShellykinsLv11Shellykins

thanks

Dw_Phillips
Dw_PhillipsLv10Dw_Phillips

I have to wonder what this soul bound will give to him i hope it is a lot more than just a “second one”

Fairy_Wren
Fairy_WrenLv14Fairy_Wren

Scorpion 🦂

AnnRaw
AnnRawLv15AnnRaw

Hi, I'm enjoying your book but can u release 2 chapters a day? If u cant, I understand

shalkey_ankegumo
shalkey_ankegumoLv3shalkey_ankegumo

Cute pet