Comments of chapter undefined of Ancient Vampire in a Modern World

Seems interesting not many can pull off vampire eating a burger but it worked.

Anything about vampire I'm here. Goodstart !

I didn't enjoy the chapter. I have seen a lot of "Vampire" type of books and this one didn't reach the level of a "Good" unfortunately. and if you are reading my comment right now please try these ones these ones are better: "Vampire Overlord System in the apocalypse" OR "My Vampire System"

I like this MC, just woke up and immediately killed a lot of people 😈😈😈😈😋👍👍👍👍

endless killings from the very first chapter I am guessing this novel (character) has no humanity !!

interesting plot 👍🏿

Found a typo in the section after Kevin hears about the diving project on the news - I'm assuming "the project deeper" is supposed to be "the project keeper"

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Ty

It's a nice one except for the messed up grammar and tenses. Vlad is too ruthless for the book, please tone it down a bit.

grammar my boy is not your speciality

yeah

I see ya author with the beginning quote being scripture

another thing . if you introduced a person on the top.. part of a scene.. wag mo ulit ulitin... like vladimir ordered burger... vladimir took a bite and liked it..

tenses of the verb.. using the same words... redunduncy... try checking for possible synonyms... avoid filipinism... instead of putting why not use placing... yan po napansin ko sa first chapter... hope na ma improve mo sya

I like it

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