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he charged them quickly... what did they buy? do they have a credit from MC? it is waaaay far from he charged at them.. since pinoy ka... charged them quickly pinagbayad niya sila ng mabilis or mabilisan niya silang pinag bayad charged at them.. translates to sumugod siya sa kanila or sinugod niya sila
luster of the skin is what?? first mob second his body is buff.. shouldn't it be buffed? large muscles with muscles like a swollen ballon... your point is conveyed on the first part... buffed . then large muscles then swollen.. redundancy at its finest... proofread edit peer review could be nice.. that is why even best selling authors has their editors
heaving up and down .. is diff from caving in..when your chest caved in . it just means that your sternum is broken .. owls sound like whoo . kroo kroo kroo is for ravens. stick to one language . instead of stances and kata.. use stances and forms... you used kata for the word form which it is not mind you.. Kata is more of showing the memorization of certain movements... a lot of Jargons.. this makes the piece not reader friendly and as a practitioner... I believe that it is not the stances and forms that differs from style to style.. it is their overall approach and execution that varies ..
Flashing scabbard... I thought that it is a quick draw or iaido.. turns out to be a flying knives sort of skill which makes no sense for the name.. meter is way too long during a battle.. unless you have monstrous long arms it would be so long... a meter is almost or a little more than 5 feet... lapu lapus blade is called Kampilan...