Comments of chapter undefined of I JUST WANT A PEACEFUL LIFE

author synopsis lead me here but you real have to solve your grammar problem a bit reading sentences in different tenses feels odd

The grammar is atrocious, the pacing is terrible. this has got to be one the worst first chapter of any novel i have ever read

RIP grammar

quack quack quack i will quack in the sea of nothingness i the great and mighty duck ask you to join me to papapapap in the sea of stars!

the phone game was his master's legacy XD

i feel like this would be wayyy better if the grammar and sentences flowed smoothly. BUT being the veteran mtl reader I and most of us are this is like a piece of coal in a snow storm compared to straight up mtl'd novels.

I wish that is next life he will live in peace.

I am sorry, I am so sorry for my dirty mind but I just wanted to say..... you see his name is Angus, what does it sound like when you take out the g, I am so sorry but I though it sounded a bit weird to me so I found this out when trying to find out why it sounded weird to me.

Kekek love this

interesting I love op mcs that just live leisurely. I do hope he reinforces his ideals though, I hate op mcs that do as their told all the time

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author pls hire and editor for these first chaoters if the novel when you had less experience because the phrasing of the dialogues and the verbs feel very clumsy to read

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Another cliche story about a very strong person being betrayed and reincarnated.

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