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Comments of chapter undefined of I Died and Reincarnated As The Hero's Companion

I Died and Reincarnated As The Hero's Companion

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Ugly_Baby
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its a very interesting story

2yr
Kenny_Kennilicious
Kenny_KenniliciousLv13Kenny_Kennilicious

This feels like I'm reading a screenplay. Overall, very interesting, but it's so bad it needs to be redone.

2yr
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daylightmoon123445
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i like the overall story but the grammar and structure need work. Not an expert myself but I can say that this story needs a bit more description with the explained actions.

2yr
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DaoistBONhOS
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good first chapter.very engaging.i like it.

1yr
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