Comments of chapter undefined of Multiverse Traveler System
Multiverse Traveler System
Jovami6729
Chapter comments4
tiene la goro goro no mi, pero lo lastima un rayo, puede volar pero prefiere gastas 5000 puntos del sistema para ir de isla en isla cuando solo tiene 15000 puntos, estaba pensando en ir a derrotar a doflamingo cuando su intangibilidad no sirve no tiene haki y solo a pasado meses que tiene su fruta mientras que mingo tiene años, creo que el mc quiere morir._.
The story isn't bad, but there are certain holes of logic, like the fact that the mc didn't make a decent preparation in his world, and he had the time and money to do it, instead he just took what he had at home and decided he went into a protecencialmetne fatal world, and things like the island lightning hurt his body... a pure lightning bolt, with no other form of energy like divine, infernal or otherwise, shouldn't hurt him, because he's a kind of living lightning bolt , author of logical reasons for these things or your story will drop a little quality.
