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Future Progression

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Noor_Alam_Khan
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Chapter8: It should be reviewed "This bag was invested by the famous scientists of Zeus"...

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Thanks :). Fixed it now.

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Noor_Alam_Khan
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Chapter 8: "There were 2 spells to be used". Numeric 2 must be literal in words.

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Jo_J
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Nicely written! You're doing really great! Be careful with punctuation and repetition. Commas are missing from multiple complex sentences. Dots are missing also. Often unnecessary spaces. In the description of Christmas I miss, for example, a piece of Chrismas caol. Don't be afraid to quote a passage. I also miss those elements related to Christmas, such as gingerbread, the smell of cinnamon, etc. After reading please delete my comments ;)

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