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Comments of chapter undefined of Future Progression

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Noor_Alam_Khan
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Punctuation marks should be corrected. Review chapter 3: I "had" to tell you,

Amateur_Author
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Fixed it. Thanks :)

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Vinodh_Kumar_1235
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Nice story writing & it's very interesting.

Amateur_Author
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Thank you so much so much :). i aM so thankful for all your help Jo. I lost a day in the beginning so been trying to write as much as possible oVer weekends. Been writing non stop like crazy. The contest ends on 28th and i plan to fix all the errors The next weekend before it goes to jury panel. I will make a note if all the errors and dedicate half a day to fix it. Thank you so much for all the support. Can’t thank you enough.

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Jo_J
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Watch out for punctuation. Commas are missing from multiple complex sentences.