Comments of chapter undefined of My Time System

uhm, everyone the chapter 1-34 is too plain, non sense, and boring. I can't edit now, because I preparing the volume 2 where the grammar of the chapter is good now and medium quality. I don't have editor to check my story so if you want to voluntary become the editor of this story, just message me anytime in order to made this story fine.

why all the capital letters😭😭😭

The heroine is female please fix it's annoying to keep reading after the word He is etc.

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It has soooany grammatical errors. You could use Grammerly for free editing or any other software. The plot is confusing with wrong word usage. This story would have a lot of potential if not for this drags

It's good

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