Comments of chapter undefined of While Others Cultivate, I Use My Multiverse System

The story is good, but the events are very abrupt and thus confusing. We dont know who or how and that is good for a mistery but if you suddenly have an explosion that will just confuse the readers like "wtf... where did that come from? At least give us some background scenes of people getting interested in the plant. I wish to believe that the girl didn't betray him but was just made to spill the information since the plant was so good... welp good luck cant wait for more !

I like the story but it is all so Confusing, you have to explain properly instead of describing events so detailed. i mean when he enters a World his home world is freezed for 3 weeks? And the other worlds he visited are freezed as well when he is not in them? And now he is sent to a random World?

so far this writing is really confusing. I just gottah say you need to organize your ideas and write it down and reread it if you still don't get why these readers are confused put down story and go do something and come back and reread it. don't just write it down and post it.

i came here for the cover..................................... yet all i get is a dying mother....................................... and also a probably dead Father................................................................. should i just go and be done with this altogether.................... or just take a little breather, come back and be a good reader.

Some things seem inconsistent. His mother could live for ove a year in the magic intensive environment, where her health deteriorated until he shielded her with plants that absorb magic. She recovered and got stronger. Now after losing the plants she is on the verge of death in seconds?

I don't blame the girl I blame him hes so naive and stupid he forgot about human greed if the girl didn't betray him her would or the teacher or one of the researchers he's just so stupid am just glad the author wrote the story this way am totally tired of reading novels where the mc make totally stupid decisions and they never come back to bite him

All happen to fast 😤😡

Also his father was just possibly blown up and several groups of invaders raided their garden space... Possible that his father stepped out and was not blown up or something (we don't know it yet). Still the bias towards his mother is strange.

Fnck that btch! you expect someone moulded by her family to be so naive? you rejected her man now you got choked by the weed you refused to reep.

Very confusing story.

cool novel so far

Thanks for the chapter

I'm not a huge fan of him just going to the system to freeze time to save his mother. while I dont want to see suffering and death, I also want to see real consequences to actions and not being saved by plot armor. the MC acted out of desperation and revealed the plant to someone he really trusted. as a result he got betrayed and his parents die as a result. if you can just use the system to save everybody, what meaning is there to anything? it's just a bunch of tension with no proper conclusions, just fairytale happy endings. I look forward to seeing how the author handles this

he leave too many hole even if his girl didnt betray him. there is spy and some how right after he visit her she stumble upon a evolutinary plant...

okay, it's okay but a bit confusing though I would be interested in a despairing character where even though, he tried his best, his mother and everything will be lost. though not likely, that would interesting

I have this story. I hate how it makes me wants to read it without stopping. I hate how's it makes me addicted with just a few chapters.

The writing is confusing as hell. sometimes sentences doesnt make sense at all. and now this development isn't making sense. I hope author improves later on.

so confusing...