MotivatedSloth
Is this even the correct chapter? Bruh. Author, if you see this comment, please reply. For now I'll be dropping this.
O god MC is already acting like a full time retard & after reading the comments this novel already looks trash. I like how the author is bashing his readers for expecting the kind of novel he implied it would be. - Your story is all over the place - Its super confusing to read it more then half the comments are like WTF is going on are you sure its in the right order? - MC already looks like a wimp - Already showing of what he should not be showing off (items, the plant) - Already making stupid mistakes for no reason well maybe money but he already had another safer way to make money that would not endanger his and his families life. - Already hiding his power for no reason whatsoever. - Already acting like a simp. - I could go on and on about how "bad" / "confusing" / ... your novel would be. Also don't act like a saint about what your readers where expecting your novel to be. Even implying it in your synopses. Ill give it a few more chapters but if half the comments are right we might as well drop it and go to the next novel.
Can you tell me if he will suffer a lot for his choices cuz it's contradictory to the 'Face Slap' tag? and I kind of have trauma with Mc suffering from 'Everything will be my way!' Will he grow or will he keep suffering even after getting burned for his mistake:? Seeing so many comments in these chapters I started to worry if I should keep reading.