Comments of chapter undefined of MCU: Viltrumite
MCU: Viltrumite
Stan_Wheeler
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This is a pretty good story, not for me, but a good story nonetheless. Also I think him being 17 when he died is a pretty lame excuse for his immaturity or whatever you said (not trying to fight with you) because when I was 12 I was pretty mature for my age. I guess it just depends on the environment we grow up in though.
A mature 12-year-old is still a child, though. And like you said, that's probably your environment that did that for you - what has the MC ever had to worry about that would push his mental state forward? Most challenges can be solved with his powers, so he's never been pushed to grow as a person. Until now, that is. You think that reasoning is lame or whatever? I think the opposite is way worse. A kid who got reincarnated when he was 17-year-old grows to an *****'s level of maturity and mindset just because he's had more years alive? That's bullsh*t. He's never experienced an *****'s life or struggles, so why would he be as mature as an ***** just because he's living a second life? It's one of the stupidest tropes I've ever seen in novels. When you age after being reincarnated, you're not continuing life when you left off in your last life, man, you're starting over. Until the MC catches up to his previous age, his maturity growth is basically on hold lol. It's not as simple as 17 + 14 = 31, it's much more complex. It brings in things like brain development, hormones, life experiences, etc, etc, but I'd rather not have to write all that sh*t out lmao. And this isn't us fighting, man. This is a disagreement. No hard feelings or whatever but I just need to get my point across.
This is at least in the top 5 Marvel fics I have ever read and there's only 7 chapters. I am immensely looking forward to more chapters. P.S. I keep trying to say something extra here but I keep deleting not knowing how to say what I want to say so Imma just say keep up the good work. P.S.S. If anyone knows some good Marvel fics that r not on hiatus or dropped plz do tell.
don't reject her....sheesh if you were going to reject MJ then you shouldn't have made her fall for the MC in the first place...like from the first time they met, why did you have to create a scenario in which she fell in love with him at first sight if you weren't going to develop a relationship between them in the first place ಠ︾ŕ˛
this is an good story don't mind the comments about power ups and character development the character development is good write at your own pace . ignore the comments about using his strength and intelligence for power. books with good character development are rare. he is already stronger than most mcu characters if he gets any more power ups it would be boring. the best and only upgrade he might need are earplugs since they are his weakness.
I really like this it's not too extra like those fan fiction where they just join the world and start dragging the readers to soo much random shit I mean an AI it's too early its perfect like this slowly developing this is what a fanfiction should be soo keep up the good work author-sama plus i love how you explain and get us readers involved you are amazing at your work and very talented please don't let other comments define what you do and just do how you would do it.
