Stan_Wheeler
always with the same character growth thing ... why does he need to grow as a character if he is already good enough? I mean I get it a story needs something like that but why not have a badass MF and a good story is it too much to ask for something like that without all that angst and drama shit?
Because I'm trying to write him like a real person? And real people have problems they have to overcome and grow from? Especially when you consider the MC's an actual teenager and not a grown *****? Like, seriously, do you know how stale it would be if he was just 'badass'? People who are over the mental age of 12 would pretty quickly stop reading after the ump****th time he face slapped some random douche.
This is at least in the top 5 Marvel fics I have ever read and there's only 7 chapters. I am immensely looking forward to more chapters. P.S. I keep trying to say something extra here but I keep deleting not knowing how to say what I want to say so Imma just say keep up the good work. P.S.S. If anyone knows some good Marvel fics that r not on hiatus or dropped plz do tell.
don't reject her....sheesh if you were going to reject MJ then you shouldn't have made her fall for the MC in the first place...like from the first time they met, why did you have to create a scenario in which she fell in love with him at first sight if you weren't going to develop a relationship between them in the first place ಠ︾ŕ˛
This is a pretty good story, not for me, but a good story nonetheless. Also I think him being 17 when he died is a pretty lame excuse for his immaturity or whatever you said (not trying to fight with you) because when I was 12 I was pretty mature for my age. I guess it just depends on the environment we grow up in though.
this is an good story don't mind the comments about power ups and character development the character development is good write at your own pace . ignore the comments about using his strength and intelligence for power. books with good character development are rare. he is already stronger than most mcu characters if he gets any more power ups it would be boring. the best and only upgrade he might need are earplugs since they are his weakness.
I really like this it's not too extra like those fan fiction where they just join the world and start dragging the readers to soo much random shit I mean an AI it's too early its perfect like this slowly developing this is what a fanfiction should be soo keep up the good work author-sama plus i love how you explain and get us readers involved you are amazing at your work and very talented please don't let other comments define what you do and just do how you would do it.