Comments of chapter undefined of Arpious of the Planes

I didn't really get it. mc was an actual feather?

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imagine being a feather...yup can't relate to it

very nice. i read it for some time, if get it boring i will stop read it. work hard. thanks for chapter!.

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I don't know if you know but your story is on other pages. If they are yours, can you update them?

Can a pen sink? Not logical.

Imagine you accidentally choose no and then can't evolve anymore .worst missclick you could ever experience

experience

experience

experience

experience

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Noice

There is a solution to everything. You can write better when it rains. But it doesn't rain too often in most parts of the globe. You can live in a place with heavy rainfall throughout the year OR you can turn on your shower close all natural sources of light and pretend that it's raining.

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