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Bah!! Dude has over 100 women , not that he needs more, so these others should move on & Ely should not get involved, he obviously doesn’t have time for them or his others if he keeps adding more. He better not make any moves on Ely. She has her family, that’s all she needs.
I would maybe try to keep them together. Right now she already is separated from the first 2 members taken from her & this way she still has some company. But on the other hand, if they split & she comes across another worthy person to join the family to expand and maybe bring in another aspect or direction if needed for adjustment of the story as you invision. Either way can be done, it’s more of how you feel the story is progressing to your vision.
Review at 32 chapters in. So far it's been a very enjoyable & interesting story to read as we follow the MC after awakening & having memories of past lives make her worried she will lose who she was to them. Not to mention learning to get stronger to protect the ones close to her. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
How can she not believe it? After all, she was a a bad person in the book, even thou something’s have changed, there is too much against her & not enough to give an easy pass.
Aria "Well, Technically as my future wife, you will be taking care of me constantly everyday, basically you will still be my maid! Because as my mom told you before, I'm lazy!"
well, then how did you know i was thinking about you just now? lol
Aria is 8 right now. Let me guess, her gift at 10 is to be a "cruel master"! lol
Gardener!
Umm.... wouldn't her near blindness kind of make it hard to fight?
Reading this part, my guess with how sadistic her mom is, the reports are the ones her father gave her & his request to what she would do to make them fall for her & it had the note she made herself about planning to get close to duchess. This way it might drive a wedge with the duchess as if Dahlia was just using her to discard later. So it is a way to still torment the daughter.