Comments of chapter undefined of Ascension of the Immortal Asura

Young master cliche was random and only makes sense in the context of other cultivation novels. Both incidents so far were totally random. Why not have a scene where a fairy comes and takes a dump on his head. You see that's just as random. You aren't used to seeing fairies take dumps on heads so you didn't add it, but it's still bad writing because it leans entirely on other, better, novels that perhaps used young masters that were believable and not random.

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great second chapter

Good stuff. Thanks for the meal.

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