Comments of chapter undefined of Gamer in Game of Thrones

Thanks for the chapter looking forward to more!

way way before cannon. dope. just if you have magic...dont make MC a god capable of altering the environment and more or less play god. OP MC is dope. God MC, nope [ in a bk like this ]

timeline is a little too far back for me, the mad king ruled for 20 years , so when story starts the mc will be 30. which to me means lack of good romance, no dani, Sansa, margary sand snakes . cant think of anyone his age to have , cerci is too evil and twisted, lyanna is okay, or arianne princess of Dorne if you adjust the age

Good but a tad short

noice

This was actually pretty decent. I will pray you don't drop the fic

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just me but I think if it was GoT I would shoot for pre doom valerya and placed in some noble house and some form of immortality. would mass all the knowledge on how to do all the good stuff then start building another kingdom away from doom central, maybe even early conquer Westeros and make sure the andals never won on the invasion. think about it, if you could build valerian culture minus the slaves and keep the andals out it would be the height of civilization later on. anyway was just my musings. think you have a great start hope to read more.

simple i like it like that. but why don't hi have mana like in the gamer? and in the game of thrones they have magic and dragons so do u will make it later or will u make him a warrior?

Honestly Idk if it's just me but at this point, If I see any fanfics that have the "Gamer" power then it's an instant turn-off for me. I've just seen so many of them it just gets annoying. Sorry, but prob won't read this.

Thanks for the chapter. Don't drop.

beast sumkons in the store tab? 👀👀

Interestingly start...

is this a harem?

green and gery eyes you say sounds suspicious

So less than 10 chapters in a year is a bit slow. If you are still trying to make a popular story then I suggest you pick one of the several you started and finishing them. Put a goal of ending the story at 100 chapters or less if that’s easier. But do finish. Whether you like it or not, you clearly do not have the time for more than one at a time. I only suggest trying to stick to one for a while because then you could get a solid following, and maybe that will encourage you to write more.

great chapter