Comments of chapter undefined of Harem king System
Harem king System
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No one likes Shido for obvious reasons. Then you make your mc a literal clone of Shido. What do you think happens? Your mc is not as smart as Kira in Dea5h note so no, charismatic evil mc. Your mc just goes with what he knows from shows, he's like a baby who needs someone to give him training wheels just to survive. No independence at all. I doubt your mc can ever survive anything without his cheats and future knowledge. Now with the million dollar question, is there any redeemable quality within him? None. Seriously, none. When he can't do something, he panics. When he knows something, he manipulates but does it like a noob thus plot armor takes care of making it work. He's not a good nor a charismatic evil mc. He's stupid with little to no creativity. He can't act for himself without the guidance of future knowledge. He's like an evil stupid baby. It was disappointing because the only bad thing was the mc and the spoon feeding, plot armor giving system. So yeah... the setting and situation is wasted.
This is a fanfic my dude you don't have to force it to follow plot to get a result you want, you can make soichiro die in some other way cause mc interacts with world or smtn lol. This just seems dumb. Why not kick out shido group or kill shido or make everyone follow mc out the bus instead of going with shido?
Ugh, I'm so tired with short sighted evil mcs. Their plans are so rudimentary and questionable that everything should've broken in pieces a long time ago. But no, everything magically works in accordance to plot armor. When I read this kinds of plot armor, it makes me imagine a guy who cannot put a square in a triangle hole. Next thing we see he chopped the square into a triangle just to make it right with brute force. Ugh...
I don’t think if he throw shido out , girls will thinks he is evil(and take his heart with the power of ope ope no mi when everyone didn’t see it, and kill him lately), now the zombie world is dog eat dog world, who is stronger is ruling and ordering ,why he just stands and doing nothing like that simp Takashi when Shido speaks, i fu*king hate it
My opinion of the chapter? I believed that I have realized something, the MC is normal. I hadn't understood it until now. He is a normal person trying to use his cheats to fulfill the dreams of a normal person after going through an isekai. I think that many other comments judge the MC wrongly since they do not consider this fact so important. The MC is not a charismatic villain, a hero of justice or an antihero of gray morality, he is a normal teenager. The MC is not ready to save the world. It is impossible for someone normal to be prepared for that. The MC hesitates too much. It is impossible for someone normal not to doubt his situation. This fact is very interesting because it means that Maiko Shuu is exactly what the author wrote that she is, a normal teenager with cheats and a mission that is bigger than him. These are good elements for creating a good personal growth story, if the critiques don't destroy the author's inspiration. My opinion for the author is that: if he wants to create a good story, don't pay too much attention to the comments. People in Webnovel are too used to MCs who are supposedly 'normal people' but thanks to the magical side effect of reincarnation they lose all anxiety, insecurity, indecision, laziness, etc., these people change mysteriously and lose all the defects of their normality as if they were another. Maiko is more human than them. Maiko should choose the first option and go for Rei. Why for Rei? It is the most difficult and illogical option, but humans are not logical beings I think everyone should understand that. It is true that this route has the greatest danger and the least short-term gains. Hell, going with the others will give him a lot more chances with the other girls in the nearest future but ... Is that really what we want? The second option is the easiest but it also means the simplest development and zero personal growth. The first option is the most challenging and the one that can create the most subsequent development of the story since the MC will have to do more to get the hearts of the other girls, this will undoubtedly make the story more interesting in the long run . Author, I wanted to point out again not to give too much importance to the comments, not even my own. If you don't believe me just look at the author of Annihilation Maker, he is the best example on this web of a person who puts the development of the novel first. These are my personal thoughts for the author as the # 1 fan.
You know, I really like your story, it brings us a more human MC, I mean, you give us a teenager with powers that are too big for him and it gives him a better growth environment, personally I don't like Rei, she's a bitch, but If you change his attitude, he could fit in, and he's just a kid playing with strength that he doesn't understand (the MC) so he could go for Rei since she's harem material if you change his attitude, but also the disorder that the MC is having He makes him act on impulse and that's a bit annoying because he makes him similar to Shido, not the same but similar, he doesn't have to be a hero but he doesn't have to be a villain either, he was just a normal person until just over 2 weeks ago, you could make realize that how it works and improve it, you do not have to take my comment into account, I am just one more reader, but your story has a lot of potential, you should not stop for fools who only come to give silly comments based on themselves and not in a constructive criticism of history, that is yes everything, keep up your good work.
Hello author! Thanks for your hard work! My question is, why do you ask your readers' opinions about the fate of a character, if you still do it your way. You asked if you want to kill Shido? The majority answered "Yes! Kill him!" But what do we see next? You hesitate and try to keep him alive so that you can use him in the future so that the story will follow the canon. You asked if Rey is needed in the harem? The majority answered "No!" And what do we see? You try again to excuse yourself and join her to the MC's harem. If you don't plan on taking your audience's opinion into account, then don't ask. Just write as you originally intended. Personally, in this case, I feel cheated. Be creative, we love your work. Create as you see fit and as you can see, you are good at it. Just do not ask us about the fate of anyone, if you still do it your way, do not give false hopes. It is unpleasant to be deceived. (Google Translate)
reset options, [leave with Shido the bringer of chaos, and convert him into a minion] -although shido a dangerous element, if handled correctly; he could also has his own uses. (ex. the depravity that occurs in the bus, after main cast left. was a result of his "persuasion") -Another way could be, to have one of the mob heroines take his place; while staying loyal to maiko.
