Comments of chapter undefined of Gamer of the Dead

I'm not sure what it is about edgy names that attracts new authors.. maybe it just sounds cool to people but I cringe so hard when I read stuff like azreal, azareal, Damion, darrion, bloodsythe, nitewing, ect..

Please the paragraphs smaller

i really hope that what is written in the summary about mc simply hvaing fun in the apocalypse and not trying to save humanity is true, because that is what i would do and such ff are extremly rare(this is my first ff where this is true)

wait, how is there so little people reading this. it's been good so far

Zombies probably heard his voice

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Sigh just discovered this seemed intriguing but i cant do premium wish you luck tho man if i ever see it as a ebook an can actually buy full story for under 12 in store might do it.

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I’m assuming English is your second language no offense intended by any means. A simple tip to improve your writing skills would be to use “I” a little less, instead focus on the surrounding subjects and tie your sentences together. The over all idea and descriptive aspects are nice and thought out, it’s a little hard to stick with because things run on without breaks though. You can break the paragraph’s up after an idea is conveyed or switch topics/perspectives to freshen it up a bit😁👍🏼

. . . I need a world like this one.

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author can you tell me is their romance or Harem [only asking]

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