Fnatic_Fan
I like the idea of the biology magic but I fear it could potentially ruin the magic of the story. Instead of using his wits and circumstances to his advantage to take advantage, Riel would end up using it as a crutch and thus lose the charm of his work. Especially now that you’re developing Lucielle and Celine more. Combat wise I’m all for it, though idk how you’ll develop combat within the story I love your work and am ecstatic you’re back
I am more inclined towards the MC acting openly as himself and getting a spine as a man. He is old enough and feels like his relationships will not progress through manipulation. He needs to become a man to attract his mother properly, and also care for the feelings of his girls. The way he is, he is cowardly.