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Comments of chapter undefined of Game to Live

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Henry_Rios
Henry_RiosLv14Henry_Rios

I thought the concept was good but the pqcing was off. And the grammar was very hard to look past as I had to edit it in my head just to read it comprehensively. Wish you would finish the story 🤞

Simvolick
SimvolickAuthorSimvolick

Thank you so much. I think that after careful consideration and re-reading the chapters, I have a couple of ideas that I want to try out. Trying it and regretting it because the story is ruined is better than abandoning it.

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Moonlight_Drake
Moonlight_DrakeLv14Moonlight_Drake

I was enjoying your story quite a bit actually. Sad to see it end this way, but if you don't have the motivation to press any further, I understand. I hope to read a completed novel of yours in the future. Best wishes to you in your future tales!

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OnionRerouted
OnionReroutedLv15OnionRerouted

not much of a fan of no response as one of the only people to read it, and also since I've been spending coins since you started releasing, also wasn't exactly happy to wait a month, to pay for the chance to know that you gave up writing it, and again, then made people pay to find that out... that's just rude...

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OnionRerouted
OnionReroutedLv15OnionRerouted

I liked it, I just thought it developed too fast, the story itself was interesting and the development of the ember, his MC cheat skills etc worked well, it just felt like the story would end extremely early, despite being a massive world with countless storylines and multiple obvious side characters for him to befriend etc... as much as I love the ending, I would have rather'd he developed his empire in a world full of every piece of fantasy BS you could think of, filled with other earthlings with similar gamer mindsets...