Simvolick
I thought the concept was good but the pqcing was off. And the grammar was very hard to look past as I had to edit it in my head just to read it comprehensively. Wish you would finish the story đ¤
not much of a fan of no response as one of the only people to read it, and also since I've been spending coins since you started releasing, also wasn't exactly happy to wait a month, to pay for the chance to know that you gave up writing it, and again, then made people pay to find that out... that's just rude...
I liked it, I just thought it developed too fast, the story itself was interesting and the development of the ember, his MC cheat skills etc worked well, it just felt like the story would end extremely early, despite being a massive world with countless storylines and multiple obvious side characters for him to befriend etc... as much as I love the ending, I would have rather'd he developed his empire in a world full of every piece of fantasy BS you could think of, filled with other earthlings with similar gamer mindsets...