Comments of chapter undefined of I marked her mine

I can not read this the way it's written. Maybe it needs to be edited, a lot? It's badly broken English ,grammar is wrong, it hurts to continue this way . On a good note, the prologue did catch my interest as far as the story goes. Maybe once it's edited properly I'll give it another try.

This is very hard to follow. I feel like having someone review to edit would be very helpful. it seems like a decent storyline