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Michelle_Garman2yrReplied to Julie_Sheltonđ€Łđ€Łđ€Ł
Instead of replying, he climbed up on the bed on his knees. His hands came out to pinch her pussy lips together and watched as some of her juice came out of lubricate her clit.- Michelle_Garman3yrCommentedCh 9 Move?
- Michelle_Garman3yrReplied to Anamika_Ana
Just a description would suffice if that's the case . Readers do not know what the guidelines were when a story is laid out . "luxury car ", "expensive looking "..
The last thing she could recall was the face of an outrageous man who was dragging her forcefully inside a Royal Royce..After that everything was a blur in her mind. - Michelle_Garman3yrCommentedCh 1 Prologue
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*Rolls-Royce
The last thing she could recall was the face of an outrageous man who was dragging her forcefully inside a Royal Royce..After that everything was a blur in her mind. - Michelle_Garman3yrCommented
I can not read this the way it's written. Maybe it needs to be edited, a lot? It's badly broken English ,grammar is wrong, it hurts to continue this way . On a good note, the prologue did catch my interest as far as the story goes. Maybe once it's edited properly I'll give it another try.
Ch 2 HIM - Michelle_Garman3yrCommented
Subtle changes in a person's character and demeanor can say a whole lot
This news gave him a shock making him look at the woman more intently than ever before. He had a feeling that he will soon have a mistress and that the elders at home will now have their peace of mind. He thought that he should be ready in the upcoming days. - Michelle_Garman3yrCommented
A good looking specimen of a man will indeed become more appealing in a complimenting set of frames. I have a thing for slightly salt and peppered hair, a beard /goatee,.. Bedroom eyes . Lashes that make any female envious to have..
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Abuse ?
This chapter has been deleted. - Michelle_Garman3yrCommentedCh 5 5
- Michelle_Garman3yrCommented
(it's really not that far from the entrance)
Vishous straightened and grabbed the bedpost with his one hand, while he grabbed the back of Ava's waist and started smashing her pussy hard. His monster rod stretched the depths of her pussy to the hilt to reach her sensitive spot. - Michelle_Garman3yrCommented
If considered to be "vulgar words" are used for other descriptions, you might as well go all out. "screw" - ****
"Do you like this, Ava?" he asked, "Do you like the way I screw you? Do you feel the head of my cock touching the sweet spot inside your pink pussy?" - Michelle_Garman3yrCommented
Green??? Ewe.. He needs to get that issue checked by medical professionals
"I love it when the mushroom head of your cock turns purple when the blood pumps in it every time you look at me. I love the way the veins inside your dick become so prominent and visible that I can feel every green line of them every time you push your hard cock inside my pussy." - Michelle_Garman3yrCommented
Did you mean heartily
Vishous's thrusts became rapid after hearing her words. The sight of her boobs bouncing hardly with his each powerful thrust made his cock even more hard and stiff. - Michelle_Garman3yrCommented
The word "boobs" is used far too much
Vishous's thrusts became rapid after hearing her words. The sight of her boobs bouncing hardly with his each powerful thrust made his cock even more hard and stiff. - Michelle_Garman3yrCommented
This does not even happen.
Instead of replying, he climbed up on the bed on his knees. His hands came out to pinch her pussy lips together and watched as some of her juice came out of lubricate her clit. - Michelle_Garman3yrCommented
*breast
He grabbed her waist, flipped her over and grabbed her boobs in a harsh grip while staying over her body and straddling her,