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Comments of chapter undefined of Black Market Merchant

Mary_Algen_Guiang1
Mary_Algen_Guiang1Lv13Mary_Algen_Guiang1

A beautiful chapter. I like how flawless the words are. I am just having trouble with the long paragraphs. I hope they can be divided a bit for an easier reading experience.

KyleSullivanJr
KyleSullivanJrLv14KyleSullivanJr

I have made some edits, hope it was an improvement

Olievela
OlievelaLv15Olievela

sure is cyborg. let's read on.

KyleSullivanJr
KyleSullivanJrLv14KyleSullivanJr

Lot of people saying they want more of the maIn characters backstory, well keep reading! Her backstory is going to be revealed over time and its going to haunt her!

Scriptamagina
ScriptamaginaLv10Scriptamagina

I wonder, what's going to happen in that kind of year in our World...Will it be like this?

Tigadua
TigaduaLv3Tigadua

Ok nice

Readingpanda
ReadingpandaLv2Readingpanda

good chapter

Devilkr_17
Devilkr_17Lv1Devilkr_17

Author try to make the world more fantasy and not use countries of the real world. U would look just like a nationalist if u make a character of a specific country and then antagonizing other countries

Kenshin_21
Kenshin_21Lv5Kenshin_21

Thanks thanks