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Comments of chapter undefined of My CEO Harem Cultivation System

Derrick_Lange
Derrick_LangeLv15Derrick_Lange

I thoroughly enjoy how you write. This story has been a big surprise to me. I like your MC. He doesn’t just blunder about like an idiot. I also like how you flesh out supporting characters without being too wordy. Although the title is bit misleading and I wonder how harem is going to fit into your story but with how you have done so far, I’m looking forward to finding out. I feel you have done an excellent job so far.

SkullsandFlowers
SkullsandFlowersLv13SkullsandFlowers

I also liked the old style, but your new one feels faster. I think you could switch between them depending on how you want the flow of time to feel.

Grangel
GrangelLv15Grangel

Yeah, I agree. Much flow improvement!!

Reaper_210
Reaper_210Lv5Reaper_210

Thanks for the chapter

SkullsandFlowers
SkullsandFlowersLv13SkullsandFlowers

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Daoist384533
Daoist384533Lv1Daoist384533

🖒

Maian
MaianLv15Maian

This chapter did seem to flow well.