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I thoroughly enjoy how you write. This story has been a big surprise to me. I like your MC. He doesn’t just blunder about like an idiot. I also like how you flesh out supporting characters without being too wordy. Although the title is bit misleading and I wonder how harem is going to fit into your story but with how you have done so far, I’m looking forward to finding out. I feel you have done an excellent job so far.