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Comments of chapter undefined of The Void Monarch

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The Void Monarch

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Heisenberg
HeisenbergLv4Heisenberg

I trust you know that harems arent good. Its just too hard to develop all the female characters and give them time in the story. Ira and Avery are already looking like an amazing couple however a slight problem i have is we still dont know ira's feelings for avery like right he accepted to marry her(we still dont know why he did that tho it would be nice to explain it) it would aso be nice if u can clarify ira's feelings for avery.

3yr
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Heisenberg
HeisenbergLv4Heisenberg

Also forgot to say great chapter btw 😂

3yr

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ForgetfulAtheist
ForgetfulAtheistLv12ForgetfulAtheist

Is it really necessary for this to become an harem? It's already pretty good and too much romance will ruin this in my opinion, Avery is plenty enough...

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darkergrim
darkergrimLv4darkergrim

Ty for the chap But pls dontdo harem yes I like harem but this storyis perfect with out it and tHe relationship with avery and ira is great i feel like it would go Shit if he were to get another girl Also can u give Him ranged abilities

3yr
WhatACliche
WhatAClicheLv10WhatACliche

🤢

3yr
TheEldestben
TheEldestbenLv15TheEldestben

keep up the good writing this book has moved up to my top five in my list supper good read[img=update]

3yr
Mud_Man
Mud_ManLv4Mud_Man

Ty for the chapter

3yr
Fabricio_Augusto
Fabricio_AugustoLv11Fabricio_Augusto

the harem may or may not be good, which determines whether it is good or not, whether heroines are generic, which is not so far

3yr
NoQuestion
NoQuestionLv14NoQuestion

thanks

3yr
Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15Daoist_Culture

Thanks!

3yr
bored_mortal
bored_mortalLv11bored_mortal

Great chapter ^^

3yr
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