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Comments of chapter undefined of Cultivation Online

JustM0mo
JustM0moLv15JustM0mo

Level up!

DaoistAvErdF
DaoistAvErdFLv15DaoistAvErdF

Agree, he can’t stay naive and innocent forever. I vote more mature content to match natural plot progression. Thank you, love the story!

mythosarcana
mythosarcanaLv15mythosarcana

if the pace of this stays roughly the same, I approve. it is a vastly different experience and adds a level of immersion to a character that truly does not know. it also feels like Yuan thus far and is not vastly off either. go for it!

Jacob_Conger
Jacob_CongerLv14Jacob_Conger

I approve for a few reasons; 1) who doesn't like a little spice with their novels 2) if he stayed completely innocent and childish for much longer surrounded by this many beautiful women and regarding his abilities I'd be really uninterested after much longer. 3) since I started reading CO I have been absolutely delighted at every turn for every new change and event! Some mature content now and again is definitely welcome, just don't go and make this DC. I like them being a little different in their own aspects

Kremuss
KremussLv15Kremuss

from a character development point of view this will have to happen eventually. going all the way I mean. at least learning of it. because it will cause more harm than good for a grown man to not know some things.

Dragon_scar999
Dragon_scar999Lv15Dragon_scar999

let him get all the booty

Anon_Echo
Anon_EchoLv15Anon_Echo

I think it would suit the development to add some more mature content to the story as he learns more and gets a better understanding of his desires

Stormrall
StormrallLv15Stormrall

More mature content but slow progression of it, I’m surprised the Phoenix didn’t taste it LOL

Matthew_Barton
Matthew_BartonLv15Matthew_Barton

As long as The transition is solid then it doesnt matter to me if its pg or r :b

Weboku17
Weboku17Lv15Weboku17

I feel like this level is fine, while some younger viewers or people who just aren't comfortable with it might leave, like it was said this needs to happen for his growth. He has beautiful women around him all the time and they all like him, if nothing happened and he's still innocent while the story progresses, as he starts to go to the upper heavens, someone he cares about will most likely be hurt or killed, he needs to learn how to be a person first then a cultivator.

Xerox_STEAL
Xerox_STEALLv14Xerox_STEAL

IM IN PAIN SO PLEASE RELIEVE IT BY RELEASING MORE CHAPTERS

Daoist470365
Daoist470365Lv15Daoist470365

I vote mature

Zayah
ZayahLv15Zayah

Let him Grow in maturity, but the fact his first time doing anything sexual is still filled with his innocence, means you genuinely need to make this go on a lot longer than other authors usually would. many would be done with the innocence simply after the first one or 2 moments of sexual actions. But legit... Yuan seems to be the kind of character that besides his innocence in sexual interactions, he's extremely intelligent, and it's not like he doesn't have interpersonal skills to learn, he literally only lacks common sense, like... he's obviously aged in mind and body, but his views on the world are held back by the lacking of knowledge and I wouldn't mind a shameless Yuan who understands what it's all about in the future, but having only a little remorse for having had someone do such a thing for him because he was innocent in mind, but not being embarrassed by it. anyway, my views on this are that you need to for once in my life Im gonna agree to this one sentence... drag it out a bit more, seriously, you need to drag out his innocence more, there are obvious reasons he needs to be taught common sense and all the other information, but there are enough characters around him that would probably prefer an innocent Yuan, so there will need to be a collective decision on who teaches Yuan and Xiao Hua...yup, 2 innocent kids that need to learn about the reproductive organs of human bodies and the social norms that shackle humanity.

ForcedToMake
ForcedToMakeLv15ForcedToMake

I think keeping the novel more PG is a good contrast to DC, a little spice here and there is appropriate though - maybe try less explicit scenes and allude more to what is happening?

Voidkw
VoidkwLv15Voidkw

mature

c_pantoja619
c_pantoja619Lv15c_pantoja619

wouldnt mind either but at some point his innocent natire is gonna fade once he goes down the line cause in cultivation it is literally impossible with all the villains and murderers 💀

Novicey
NoviceyLv15Novicey

I say add more mature content once in a while. For me personally although it hasnt bothered me much cause ur writing is just so good i dont like prolonged Naïve chatacters plus i like to see the characters develope mentaly and Physically when it involves romance.

magicpootang
magicpootangLv15magicpootang

a random chapter getting jerked off by an old lady isnt good development for maturity. im out. dont know why people like to rub their crotch as they read...but have a good one i guess, readers

kagenatsu
kagenatsuLv15kagenatsu

Your work is solid, a bit more mature content won't hurt anything. In fact, it would be boring if he stays naive throughout the story.

vali_bloodborne
vali_bloodborneLv15vali_bloodborne

I think It would be a nice change of pace every now and then to put in some mature content, just not like every other chapter like DC. I have really enjoyed the style of this novel, but having a mature chapter here and there does bring a bit more spice to it as long as it helps progress the story and relationships not just for fan service.

Gravelle
GravelleLv15Gravelle

Mature content would be great for his character development, so he isnt a neive and ignorant child anymore.