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Read further and you will see the difference. the similarity only exist in like the first 5 chapters
I thought he came here because the Duke can provide training in the darkness element. So why is he taken for a knight in training?
woah woah woah slow down dude. I usually comment on how slow the stories are but this...wow... throwing stuffs on the readers and what a cliche mc
Did I lose a chapter? It just jumps with all these assumptions about the darkness element. Was he not supposed get on a boat to go to a academy?
this reads exactly like the warlock of the magus world. From the affinities to the knights etc. Even the name is similar. The only thing you did was cut out all character interaction and not explain anything. So far this is trash.
