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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto Harém

venusstarlights
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Fantastic! I want moar!!!

ElPiwo
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Pronouns: I, Me, My, Mine.{Boy}:He, Him, His, His.{girl}:She, Her, Her, Hers. {In a group that you are include}: We, Us, Our, Ours. {a group that you are not include}: They, Them, Their, Theirs. {when you talk to somebody who is alone}: You, You, Your, Yours.

Paladium
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Thanks for the chapter

Celestial_Chaos24
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juniorsoft
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Kf

juniorsoft
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Cc

juniorsoft
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Ssd

Sesshomaru_
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The pronouns really threw it off for me since it was so frequent

Shadow09
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Exp

Vincent_Samonte_0752
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quite brutal but make me horn😆 so Uprove

AEGIR123
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Juushirou
JuushirouLv4Juushirou

PLEASE GET A BETA READER AND EDITOR THIS WAS COMPLETELY INCOMPREHENSIBLE I COULD BARELY UNDERSTAND WHO WAS TALKING MOST OF THE TIME AND WHEN YOU USE HE/SHE YOU ALMOST ALWAYS HAVE THEM SWITCHED

I_Cahya
I_CahyaLv4I_Cahya

more more more more

FluffyHaremPlz
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1) plz try to use pronouns for their genders 2) I rlly hope Hanabi is in the harem 3) plz no netorare or other men sleeping with his any of his women official or unofficial 4) the most important thing no clones of Naruto, his wives/concubines/*** partners clones are fine

Kartgo
KartgoLv11Kartgo

More chapters pls!!!

Escultor
EscultorLv4Escultor

More

Spartan_001
Spartan_001Lv13Spartan_001

its good

AbsoluteVoid
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ah yes use grammarly

jeanpierregerardo
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hm

DragonkingKyo
DragonkingKyoLv6DragonkingKyo

thanks for the chapter