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It’s how you got to OPness and what you do after reaching it that determines if it’s good OPness or bad OPness. His body and dimensional energy already gave him OP potential. Adding the mutant power to absorb other mutants powers was unnecessary. Then on top of that, you tried to add mystic arts. He just met the x-men, and already a year has gone and he left to gain more power. The story was turning to be all about getting more power instead of the adventure it should have been. OP gets boring without action and/or humour. The protagonist was supposed to enjoy himself as well, but here we are, he is 16 and doesn’t seem to have any real interest in girls. Aside from his small reaction when meeting Storm, nothing. No comment on Jean, Rogue or Kitty’s looks. All he did was train and work. No playing, gambling, travelling, hobbies. So yeah, it’s better to stop there.
This is now the 3rd Marvel universe fic that I've read in the past couple of weeks where it stopped after the MC started learning from the Ancient One.. I wonder if it's a coincidence or there is something else at play :)) Anyway, I enjoyed what I've read so far, so hope that you don't drop it. Happy New Year!
Thanks for the hard work but I kinda like it how it is I mean it’s hard to write about op characters but I felt like you did a good job with how you wrote about his progression and even if he is op he has limitations. and about the thanos/Thor comment he technically can’t expose that much heat in the real world since it’d affect his surroundings to much so maybe just limit how much heat he can expose outside his realm which wouldn’t require an rewrite since your already doing that.