Comments of chapter undefined of Earth's Alpha Prime

dont think these back stories are necessary but good chapter none the less.

Man, never have I thought Jay was an Indian . Nice , plot btw .

Yes! Very well written, keep it up. But please don't go to far with these separate little stories of the 11 alias. My main focus is and always will be the main character who is the heart and soul of why I am drawn to this book. the driving force should remain with him.

I think your story would be smoother if you stuck to your main character’s viewpoint and saved these other characters as special inserts in the future

Hi 1st

Good chapter

first yay!!

oof when did the chap get released i was waiting all of yesterday.....

Nice chapter! !!!!

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hmm

I thought she was low-levelled cause she was a healer and those are slow levellers most of the time but this also makes a lot of sense

great novel

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The use of them System seems pretty straight forward and easy to understand. I wonder how many players won't survive their first day because they don't know how to access it?

I am really happy you met your goal, I am ready for more chapters for sure. This is a super interesting read and has so much potential, you are doing great!

Thank you for the chapter!

me!

Thnx for the chapter It's great.

Thanks for the chapter