Comments of chapter undefined of THE GREATEST OF ALL TIME
THE GREATEST OF ALL TIME
Mujunel_the_Mystic
Chapter comments21
So many silly comments... a young couple that is separated by distance, a football player Obsesed With becoming the best. its a very naturaL crysis. i do hope the author doesnt pull the pregnancy card, becaus one would think somebody like zach would always use condoms... In anycase i think its good writing, maybe it is t suposse to be stable so soon in his career.
Buy a gift and hope she's appeased. WOW! I can already see them breaking up next week. Though I don't want to see this happen as I like Camilla but mc doesn't deserves a girlfriend with his mentality. Hope author has some real character growth in mind soon because an mc like this makes me angry i can't bear it for long. BTW anyone else feel like juve/MC about to lose this game horribly? just gives me that vibe for some reason.
I am kinda mad about the relationship part too. Imo author might be trying to make the novel realistic but what I want to say here is that this thing is a novel for a reason, people read it for their fantasies and stuff, not to end up in reality again. Putting too much of 'reality' would only serve to turn off a lot of readers. I don't know if peeps will drop cuz this novel really does amazing in the football part plus this probably isn't author's main source of income too so all in all author has no need to change the story for the readers. But in the end, we all still hope to see his relationship going strong, it's absolutely heartbreaking too see camila, getting treated this way and Zachary acting so immature despite having two lifetimes of experience, which is against logic or he simply has too low eq except for football related matters.
