FreshMelon
tried to keep up with it man cause I really liked where it was heading. I'm not gonna say adding multiple worlds or realities is what killed it cause i definitely think as a concept it could work quite well. I think it's just alot of information way quicker than it out to be. Its alot to keep up with, especially with the reader already having to deal with the MC having an unstable mental state. The narrative between some chapters is so jarringly different sometimes, especially when he went into VR chaos game(which I think is the world he came from) and also when he went to this new world. TLDR; The idea of the story is sound and I enjoyed it, but the important information being thrown at you is way to much at once