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Ianuspater

Ianuspater

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2021-03-15 JoinedGlobal
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  • Ianuspater
    Ianuspater2yr
    Commented

    makes me think of -Everyone is Young Except Me-

    Yuan nodded and said, "I guess I can try using the Thousand Knife Technique with this dagger on weaker monsters when I have the time."
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    Cultivation Online
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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  • Ianuspater
    Ianuspater2yr
    Commented
    After his brother had 'mysteriously died' in the sect, Xiao Juyan had done everything he could to become stronger and take revenge. He didn't know how he would face his father when returned back to the 'Sky Fortune Kingdom', if he didn't kill his brother's assassin. 
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    Monarch of Time
    Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
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  • Ianuspater
    Ianuspater3yr
    Commented

    tried to keep up with it man cause I really liked where it was heading. I'm not gonna say adding multiple worlds or realities is what killed it cause i definitely think as a concept it could work quite well. I think it's just alot of information way quicker than it out to be. Its alot to keep up with, especially with the reader already having to deal with the MC having an unstable mental state. The narrative between some chapters is so jarringly different sometimes, especially when he went into VR chaos game(which I think is the world he came from) and also when he went to this new world. TLDR; The idea of the story is sound and I enjoyed it, but the important information being thrown at you is way to much at once

    Ch 43 Again
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    I Reject Quests
    Urban · FreshMelon
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  • Ianuspater
    Ianuspater3yr
    Commented

    "counter-clockwise" instead of "anti-clockwise" would probably be a better wording here. loving the story, btw.

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    I Reject Quests
    Urban · FreshMelon
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  • Ianuspater
    Ianuspater3yr
    Replied to SkillsMasterAkurai

    I've found your cheese curds in my sock drawer and I do not approve of your style in regards to diplomatic relations.

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    The Urban Dao Child.
    Fantasy · THE_WORDSMITH
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