Comments of chapter undefined of Steel Waste
Steel Waste
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I want to thank you for being consistent in your releases and finishing your story. I also want to thank you for the mature way you handle criticism and hate. I don't remember you ever complaining or arguing with randoms in the comments. You never held the story hostage either. I enjoyed your story and will miss the updates every morning. Thanks again for the story. You did a great job.
I actually agree with most of author's review. My criticism to the work is the sudden big power spikes towards the end that in my opinion could have prevented if there was a power cap through the system and Afton's goal becomes powering up through tech which could have helped foreshadowed aliens. The plot progression is already there.. You could have used that wild wasteland perk encounter with the crash alien spaceship for tech build up and alien foreshadowing.. My suggestion for next work related to this universe is just making this the background setting and start with new characters.. Would be fun without having to create too powerful enemies for Afton..
I personally liked the alien arc/ending. The way you drew us into the story by almost having the mc almost kill his daughter in his panic and grief really brought out the feels for me. And while it was rather out of the blue, that is also how Afton felt at the time. Great Novel! looking forward to the next one
