Comments of chapter undefined of Hunter X Hunter - The Unknown Fate

yes, good job. I mean but if we're comparing to the basic 20-25 pages, all the 31 chapters you written would amount to 15 chapters of an 25 page book. I'm not hating on your book, I like it very much. I only said it's a little too short.

I like the story, but chapters are too short.

HxH was systematic logic, very imaginary but complicated of course the most interesting manga~~~ for author if you has limited logic and creativity please make mc with enchanter, transmutter or emitter, this 3 type don't play with BS (easy to explain almost fair play nen amount ≈ causality effect)... don't destroy your startup stories with smartass vows, rubbish limitations and idiotic risks... simple da best~

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks

Thanks

Thanks for the chapter keep writing and waiting for new chapters to read

cool

feels like a tutorial

Good chapter just to short.