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Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn in Naruto as Naruto's twin brother (dropped)

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Ansura
AnsuraLv5Ansura

the last two chapters could be just written off as: the trip to tazuna's home went same as canon with barely any interference from menma bro dont get into habit of writing meaningless filler chapters, even if you turn Menma into an asshole villain or a battlejunky as long as he follows his own path and does what he wants to do while living his life however he wants most readers wont mind it, anti-hero and evil-mc fics are popular for a reason, i personally prefer those along with a selfish mc but that might be my bias speaking. Mc isnt god-tier yet that he can waste his time watching anime scenes live. just do something unique add your own flavour to it, even if its him suddenly charging haku from behind and eliminating her. Everyone has watched naruto and see how it goes, we want your version of it.

Neminem_Umbra
Neminem_UmbraAuthorNeminem_Umbra

Well I did mention that Menma being there does not change much fight.

dadaoist
dadaoistLv6dadaoist

Worthless, just the writing version of the manga. Never understood author that do this.

ComTolManBoePyaJhu
ComTolManBoePyaJhuLv6ComTolManBoePyaJhu

zero creativity huh~ cannon surf, hero tendency, bs knowledge,,, another 8th grade syndrome~

Beniiboy23
Beniiboy23Lv3Beniiboy23

Yepp another bystander ...goodbye

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a 3