Brendanjoke
Hey man what is going on for 20+ chapters since the vampire arc? Like why do we not know anything about our MC? Is he going looking for a job? Just lazing around all day? You keep mentioning “routine” and mundane but this guy doesn’t have a job so his day to day isn’t exactly “routine” or common atleast for us. I appreciate the slice of life but even still what are some motivations of our MC? He must have some as a 25yo right? I feel that instead of all that wishy washy monologuing of how to restore his relationship with Ash, which for 20chaps now nothing much has happened, you coukd have focused on Adalia or the MC himself. Basically what I’m saying is you don’t need to extend the arc to portray the struggle of the relationship. You can always switch focus then come back and yet the point is still taken. At least then we’ll have had some more of the world and characters fleshed out.
Wouldn’t it have been better tofid out what year irene/ria left instead of.... oh, what year so you THINK it is over there? Ash left ~5110 Game is 5314 “Now” 5440 .... how does that help the story... Now if Ria dropped a clue like, we left in year wxyz, and been here (already forgottten what was stated) after the conversion it would have been 5440, then that tells us if time moves differently between worlds as well as when the epic battle took place (probably not when the game ends)