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Comments of chapter undefined of He used to be a Reserve Genin

timursgimranovs
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I don't know Author. MC could've easily pretended to be just a friend who knows nothing about Naruto and just wants to be his friend. I don't know why you are creating a huge drama here.

Shem_Sama
Shem_SamaLv1Shem_Sama

another must "Protect Naruto Squad" author here. wasting the low profile or sacrifice given to him by his mother just to be friends with naruto or to create more drama like most in fanfiction.net

David_Drake
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I'm starting to see a trend that any small slip up will be blown so out of portion that the story will distort beyond what I'd expected

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nick_maynard
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Author please don't take anything anyone else says to harshly What you are doing is a difficult story line to create but I personally believe you are doing good and admittedly somethings people say can be used for improvements but please don't make a change in your story that you would not enjoy if it was in a story written by someone else I'm not hating on the comments from others in general but every person tends to view things differently and think about things differently this leads to people enjoying different things Hopefully this comment makes sense I'm cutting it off here as I'm not sure if how I expressed this is understandable and I don't have any idea how to make it easier to understand đŸ˜©

RockyZeNiNja
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I just found out from this that Naruto dies in Boruto so thats mean Boruto is not canon to me. <:(

Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

More drama... Why not...

Zach50000
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So will he be able to help naruto study in the ways of the uzumaki in secret. Also did you make the eye of kaguya and chakra chains a uzumaki hiden or kekkei genkai or both.

Mr_Plothoel_58
Mr_Plothoel_58Lv2Mr_Plothoel_58

Well, it's interesting take on Naruto fanfic for sure. A lot of times In another fanfic, the Author just take Narutoverse as it is presented in anime. But in here I can see a delicate work of shinobi especially in covert and espionage act. Which is really a big deal in ninja world. Keep up the good work.

jajaja00
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thanks

JulianGanim
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Thanks

AdrianVeidt
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thanks for the chapter

zeraf
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thanks for the chapter