Comments of chapter undefined of Rise of A Badass Businesswoman

This is a great start. keep it up.

nice

I like the smooth mystery embedded in this first chapter. It makes the reader want to find out about the relations of the boy

Awesome first chapter

Wow! I liked the intro so much, you have a very wide set of vocabulary. And the CEO the male lead I guess? Very cold, I would like to see his character development!

I liked it how you made him look a bit cold at the beginning and then his thoughts made it clear how perplexed he was to see the boy. Nice exposition, keep it up girl!!

Nice start, but I have a feeling that he was his son, not brother