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Comments of chapter undefined of D & O System

japprentice
japprenticeLv5japprentice

disappointing chapters. if these chapters were a necessity for your plot, you could have put it all in a single chapter.

SirZed
SirZedLv14SirZed

...Is this story going to be constantly the MC babysitting Harry Potter? And just because he's Hermiones' brother he feels obligated to help? Can't he do his own thing and help Harry Potter if he's really in trouble? He's totally wasting the System's potential...

Tonyorobsky
TonyorobskyLv13Tonyorobsky

... Why bother with that flying lesson if it changes nothing? Why bother with an OC and time-traveling Hermione if nothing changes? Why bother retelling all those canon events that we already know about? Time-skip to something actually relevant!

MyNameWasStolen
MyNameWasStolenLv6MyNameWasStolen

great story, you love to see it. Keep it up author :)

King_P
King_PLv13King_P

Author San I would like to know What's the use of an Oc Hermione in this Novel ??? I mean why a Hermione from future of other timeline If there's already our MC in this verse who knows the plot of the entire HP-verse ??

MarkuzBlack
MarkuzBlackLv6MarkuzBlack

thanks for the update

Roarrrrr
RoarrrrrLv5Roarrrrr

thanks for the chapter 😄 hope you could upload more soon

Adelasorra
AdelasorraLv6Adelasorra

Thank you

Totallycool
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Thanks for sharing!

Roarrrrr
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LazyAdept
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Thanks for the chapter

cade2065
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degermon
degermonLv6degermon

Thanks

NeoNinja73
NeoNinja73Lv13NeoNinja73

Thanks for the chapter~~😄👍

Adithya_M
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